Love it! Thanks for teaching me a new (to me) word and form. I'm in a short story cycle on Medium, but will write a pantoum and post it here before posting there in a few weeks when the cycle is complete. By the way, in the past few years I've set some challenges (or prompts) for myself with unfamiliar forms of writing. One of my favorites was the ghazal: www.poetryfoundation.org/learn/glossary-terms/ghazal.
Love it! Thanks for teaching me a new (to me) word and form. I'm in a short story cycle on Medium, but will write a pantoum and post it here before posting there in a few weeks when the cycle is complete. By the way, in the past few years I've set some challenges (or prompts) for myself with unfamiliar forms of writing. One of my favorites was the ghazal: www.poetryfoundation.org/learn/glossary-terms/ghazal.
Thanks for prompting me with the ghazal, Miles! I will try my hand at this fun new form & report back too.
Mandala being
A) radial balance
B) within reach if hands and feet
C) yielding and flowing
D) hearts nature tracking infinity
B) within reach if hands and feet
E) trust you know when to dance and when to re-treat
D) hearts nature tracking infinity
F) soles to the ground, crown to the sky
E) trust you know when to dance and when to retreat
G) what are you willing to experience?
F) soles to the ground, crown to sky
H) if it doesn't feel right, inverse and ask why
G) what are you willing to experience
C) yielding and flowing
H) micro, macro ~ vibration you amplify
A) radial balance
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Love love love love!!! “Inverse & ask why”
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*** 'of' hands and feet, not 'if'
'soles to the ground, crown to the sky' is a wonderful capture and cadence.